Male character design

Drawing \ Figure | 06/27/06 @738 | Jane | critiques (9) | views (2661)

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This is a character design I used quite a lot of time on, at least for me. I was inspired by the designs from Final Fantasy X, and Tetsuya Nomura's style there, where he used no variation in the colourtones to achieve depth. I guess I have still a way to go to manage that myself, but this is my current attempt.

4H pencil, 0,5 HB leadpen, Wacom and Photoshop CS

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bakatron

06/27/06 @749

well i think its pretty clear and converys the point which is the first thing any concept artist needs to.

aesthetically speaking theres an issue with the way the right leg relaxes forward and the foot. if you changed its perspective slightly towards the right, you would have a better pose and a more relaxed figure.

nomura used a lot of east and islander asian influences for ffx.

Jane

06/27/06 @752

Yes, that foot bothered me.

Thank you Bakatron for making it much clearer to me what exactly the problem was!

Valera

06/27/06 @810

Excellent character design.
his left sholder is a bit to big, Barakton allready said about the problem with his foot... other then that, great work!

Daykan

06/27/06 @814

very nice character!

Cigaro

06/27/06 @883

agree with above comments...i find the fingers to be a bit small too, but just my taste

and the knees are maybe too upwards positioned in this case
but what i really like is the style, you still have that small inclination towards disney

shyamshriram

06/28/06 @185

Nice character Design Jane

yea that leg..and hands could be more relaxed...those fingures looking bit small to me
Nice pattern

Keep posting !

EDIT: Sorry i forgot to mention..feet are well drawn

seeThrou

06/28/06 @286

aside from the anatomical issues,there is some incredible detail in you work, Its cool that you show the extras in the pattern you made, I think you put a lot of thought and effort into all your works and it shows how well balanced they are!

SandraS

07/28/06 @869

Really cool! It is very very Final fantasy alike, but who cares, its great drawn.

I see no special flaws, exept for the foot, but you know that. And well... if i study it and be very super-picky, I think his neck is placed more to the left on his body, which makes his right boob bigger than the other.

Cool pattern. I'm amazed of the symmetry in it. Can't wait too see your skills develop

takren

09/06/06 @886

Very nice

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