Nice character...

Really nice!

like the flat colour scheme

I think the legs are too long.
The right hand grabs the keys in a funny way and the keys float in the air.
Besides that, the colors and character design are very good
+7

nice character agree with Hybridos about the legs ,they are too long,the hand looks like as it pull down something(if i can say in that way)may be it can be a little more free motion i really like the colours u used and the face expression

so nice

Nice choice of color and design for the cloth, i think the same about the leg.
Nice work!

Beautiful colors!....well done!
Carlos

Thank you, everyone.

Hybridos: I believe that the thumb is placed on the wrong side of the key ring. About the keys floating in the air, it was meant to be movement (he shakes the keys, in a victorious manner). Thanks for a constructive comment!

Most of you: Yup, the legs are too long. Or maybe it's the torso that's too short... When I started this, I thought I would draw him in that style where the proportions are rather small and tight, but I forgot myself halfway in the drawing and so the legs grew waaay too long. I didn't notice before someone told me yesterday, after I posted it. But thank you for pointing that out, I will take better care of such things (hopefully) for my next drawing.

Aha !! a CLEAN stuff from Jane !!
Lovely scheme..
btw, i wont say anything about proportion..coz u knew it already

Yeah, I can draw clean stuff too... I I can get my lazy self from the sketch board

Good character design. I like the face expression I agree with te comments done about the legs +8

Like the style and the clean lineart. Good work.

Cool character design, very good illustration

great character study and coole style

I love it! The linework is so inspiring. At first I thought you had used Illustrator cause it was so clean. Really nice work Janne!
Looking at the face I can tell this design was never meant to be realistic. So, the legs look nice like this, in my oppinion. I can't find anything to pick on. It's perfect! >_<
Do more of these drawings! That's an order.

This is a very cute design! Your line work is professionally clean, and the detail on his clothing is done where it's not overwhelming. Nice job on his expression too, heh..

Lovely job on this.
Very clean .
+10

great! simply great..you have become so wonderful at it...
i love it..
cheers!